Aakhein
Aankho ky pehray tere huea or bhi gehray
Daar na sakay hum zamane se kabhi
Chahein kyun na ho teri hi mehfilae
Karay hum wo ishaaray jo aankhein teri chahein
Aesay khwab hain mere jo mujh se ye cheen leyti hain
Qaid si hai teri aankho mein zindagi meri
In main ab rehta hoon to saanso ka meri pata de
Jeena to zara sikha dae
Khud mein jo rehta hoon a tu sambhal lay
Shayad teri ankhon mein basa hai mera jahaan
Mehangi par gae teri ye ankho ki saadgi
Samjha mein kabhi na in ki ulfat
Khud ko dektha hoon jo aankho mein teri
sochta hoon zamane mein meri jaga hi kaha thi
Teri aankho ka ishara ksay ab mein samjhun
Tera jana tha itna zaroori ?
By Usman Ghani
Sach mei bohat zada deep words use krty hain app
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ReplyDeleteYe to kamal likha hai
ReplyDeleteEvery word shola hai bhai shola agg laga di dil mai
ReplyDeleteMachine ho app to masterpiece banane ki
ReplyDeleteHuge respect
ReplyDeleteLove your soul
ReplyDeleteBhai kmaal sach mai
ReplyDeleteLove you sir ji
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is so amazing love your words
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ReplyDeleteBhai bohat ala
ReplyDeleteSeedha dil se rooh tak ko chu gaya
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ReplyDeleteYour words have power
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ReplyDeleteKhud mein jo rehta hoon a tu sambhal lay
Shayad teri ankhon mein basa hai mera jahaan
This hit me right in the feels
ReplyDeleteKhud mein jo rehta hoon a tu sambhal lay
Shayad teri ankhon mein basa hai mera jahaan
I could read this over and over
ReplyDeleteThis is poetry at its finest
ReplyDeleteHow do you do it every time?
ReplyDelete“I felt every emotion in this
ReplyDeleteThis deserves to go viral
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ReplyDeleteI wish I could write like this
ReplyDeleteThis is what poetry is all about
ReplyDeleteYour words bring such clear images to my mind
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ReplyDeleteEvery line feels like a spell being cast
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ReplyDeleteThe raw emotion in this piece gave me chills
ReplyDeleteI got goosebumps reading this
ReplyDeleteThis feels so honest and heartfelt
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ReplyDeleteThis poem feels like it was pulled straight from real life
ReplyDeleteEvery line is perfection
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ReplyDeleteIt’s like I lived every line of this poem
ReplyDeleteI could feel the emotion behind each word
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ReplyDeleteThis poem feels like a call to action
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ReplyDeleteEvery sentence is crafted with such care and thought
ReplyDeleteThis poem is as beautiful as it is powerful
ReplyDeleteEvery poem you write just pulls me in
ReplyDeleteYou’ve got such a unique voice in your writing
ReplyDeleteI can’t stop thinking about this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis tugged at my heartstrings
ReplyDeleteYou’ve written something truly moving
ReplyDeleteI’m at a loss for words after reading this
ReplyDeleteYou’ve left me speechless with this one.
ReplyDeleteI’ve already read this five times and I’m still amazed
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those poems I’ll come back to again and again
ReplyDeleteEvery time I read this, I find something new to love
ReplyDeleteYou’ve raised the bar for what poetry can be
ReplyDeleteThis is the definition of what great poetry should be
ReplyDeleteYou’ve written something that will be remembered for a long time
ReplyDeleteEvery poem you write is better than the last
ReplyDeleteYou’ve got an incredible gift for writing
ReplyDeleteSeriously, how do you keep coming up with this amazing stuff?
ReplyDeleteI had to take a moment after reading this
ReplyDeleteThis poem stopped me in my tracks
ReplyDeleteYour words are breathtaking
ReplyDeleteYou’ve created something that transcends just words
ReplyDeleteThis poem is a work of art in every sense.
ReplyDeleteI’m in awe of how artistic your writing is.
ReplyDeleteYou make writing look so easy—I’m jealous
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ReplyDeleteYour talent is something I aspire to
ReplyDeleteYou’ve captured the heart of poetry in this piece.
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ReplyDeleteYou’ve written something truly poetic.
ReplyDeleteI need to pick your brain
ReplyDeleteBohat hi deep
ReplyDeleteSo lovely touch
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ReplyDeleteDil mei utar gaya ek dam se sab
ReplyDeleteSir app Kamal ho
ReplyDeleteSuper emotional
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ReplyDeleteLove the way you discrib the story
ReplyDeleteVerse Kamal bawal
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful
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ReplyDeleteFan of your words
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ReplyDeleteZaberdast
ReplyDeleteYoung Galib
ReplyDeleteTum Jo bhi likho wo kamal ho jea
ReplyDeleteBohat Ala
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ReplyDeleteEvery word is new story
ReplyDeleteYour are amazing bro
ReplyDeleteLove your work
ReplyDeleteLong time but that was hit in my list
ReplyDeleteEmotional vibes in every words
ReplyDeleteLove the way you play with words and make a story
ReplyDeleteUsman that was so deep and vibe full
ReplyDeleteItni mushkil lines uff
ReplyDeleteThat line is powerful Khud mein jo rehta hoon a tu sambhal lay
ReplyDeleteApp to Kamal hai sir
ReplyDeleteThat was so amazing 🌹
ReplyDeleteIn the realm of words, my poetry finds its home.
ReplyDeleteCapturing emotions through verses, one line at a time
ReplyDeleteWhen words align, magic unfolds in poetry's embrace
ReplyDeleteSharing my soul through the rhythm and rhyme of poetry
ReplyDeletePoetry whispers, while words dance in delicate harmony
ReplyDeleteUnveiling my heart's whispers through poetic melodies
ReplyDeleteWords flow like poetry, painting emotions on the canvas of my soul.
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